new oneshot -- enter stage left
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thirty2flavorsI don't know what inspired this, but here you go. It's a new one-shot. I love both of the characters. It could probably be better, and maybe one day I'll edit it, but until that day comes.... la voila.
Title: Enter Stage Left
Author: Kali ( _thirty2flavors )
Rating: PG. Nothing bad. Yay.
Disclaimer: The characters are Rowling's.
Summary: "You're a dreadful actor, Black." While waiting for their cue, two actors discuss their profession.
Two men stood, in the dark of night, on a hill in a cemetery, awaiting a signal. One slouched against a large marble epitaph, lazily raising a cigarette to his lips and the other, taller, stood staring straight ahead.
“You’re a dreadful actor, Black,” said the taller man after an interlude of silence.
Regulus Black lifted his gaze from the ground and turned it on the speaker. He could see, of course, nothing more than the expressionless, white mask of a Death Eater, but it was worth a look, anyway. You got used to the masks, after a bit, he realized. It became a comfort to conceal from the world traces of worry, anxiety, or any other emotion that might not fit in.
They helped in the masquerade.
“And what, perchance, do you mean by that, Snape?” he asked, taking a drag from his cigarette, sounding disinterested -- although he wasn’t, not in the least.
“I mean,” replied the man beside him, not sparing the younger boy a glance, “that if you were a lead in a theatric performance, you’d be met with tomatoes and a large cane. Reviews would be deplorable. The entire show would go under, the director would be bankrupt and the theatre would close all because of your hideously failed attempt at acting.”
Behind the mask Regulus’ brow furrowed and he shook his head. Riddles, riddles, riddles… everything was riddles nowadays. A simple observation was flipped, twisted and skewed to obscure it from the view of the average person. If you didn’t have just the appropriate set of mirrors, you might never be able to read it.
“Well, I’ll keep that in mind next time I’m considering theatrics,” said Regulus, tossing the end of a burned-out cigarette to the ground and burrowing it into the ground with the toe of his shoe. “Career advice is exceptionally appreciated.”
“Your cousin, on the other hand,” continued Severus, his dark eyes still searching the expanse of sky before them for any inkling of a prompt, “she’s a natural. She doesn’t need to act. If she were to star, she’d have the audience convinced. She’s flawless for her role.”
Partially to make work for idle hands, Regulus reached into his cloak and lit a second cigarette in what seemed to be one grand, fluid motion. He raised it to his lips, took a thoughtful inhale, drew a conclusion and exhaled. “I doubt I’m as bad an actor as you make me out to be, Snape. You’ve got it all wrong. I’m as natural as she is.”
Severus shook his head, casting a disdainful glance at the wisps of smoke tracing their way through the night sky. “Perhaps you’d fool some of the audience, Black, but only for a brief period of time. You wouldn’t fool me, and soon enough, the audience would become disillusioned. You’d be better to close-curtain early, while there’s the chance. While the audience is still clapping.”
Regulus chuckled morosely. “You think that’s how showbiz works, Snape? You can’t quit while you’re on top -- no one ever quits while they’re on top. No one ever quits.”
For a long minute, Severus was silent.
“And you’d know, wouldn’t you?” continued Regulus, shaking his head. “You aren’t much of an actor, either.”
Silence grew thick and heavy between the two of them and Regulus waited, intently, for a response. The sentence rung in the air like an accusation and behind the mask of apathy, he could not tell if Severus was offended or anxious.
“Perhaps,” said Severus at long last, the silence shattering to a thousand pieces, “the harshest critic of an actor is another actor.”
Regulus was allowed no time for a response; at that moment, a thick, billowing cloud of green rose in the sky and began to take its ominous shape.
“That’s our cue,” said Regulus, dropping the cigarette to the ground hastily, reaching for his wand and breaking into a sprint.
“Break a leg,” muttered Severus, at his heels in an instant.
Lights.
Camera.
Action.
Fin!
<3
Kali
Title: Enter Stage Left
Author: Kali ( _thirty2flavors )
Rating: PG. Nothing bad. Yay.
Disclaimer: The characters are Rowling's.
Summary: "You're a dreadful actor, Black." While waiting for their cue, two actors discuss their profession.
Two men stood, in the dark of night, on a hill in a cemetery, awaiting a signal. One slouched against a large marble epitaph, lazily raising a cigarette to his lips and the other, taller, stood staring straight ahead.
“You’re a dreadful actor, Black,” said the taller man after an interlude of silence.
Regulus Black lifted his gaze from the ground and turned it on the speaker. He could see, of course, nothing more than the expressionless, white mask of a Death Eater, but it was worth a look, anyway. You got used to the masks, after a bit, he realized. It became a comfort to conceal from the world traces of worry, anxiety, or any other emotion that might not fit in.
They helped in the masquerade.
“And what, perchance, do you mean by that, Snape?” he asked, taking a drag from his cigarette, sounding disinterested -- although he wasn’t, not in the least.
“I mean,” replied the man beside him, not sparing the younger boy a glance, “that if you were a lead in a theatric performance, you’d be met with tomatoes and a large cane. Reviews would be deplorable. The entire show would go under, the director would be bankrupt and the theatre would close all because of your hideously failed attempt at acting.”
Behind the mask Regulus’ brow furrowed and he shook his head. Riddles, riddles, riddles… everything was riddles nowadays. A simple observation was flipped, twisted and skewed to obscure it from the view of the average person. If you didn’t have just the appropriate set of mirrors, you might never be able to read it.
“Well, I’ll keep that in mind next time I’m considering theatrics,” said Regulus, tossing the end of a burned-out cigarette to the ground and burrowing it into the ground with the toe of his shoe. “Career advice is exceptionally appreciated.”
“Your cousin, on the other hand,” continued Severus, his dark eyes still searching the expanse of sky before them for any inkling of a prompt, “she’s a natural. She doesn’t need to act. If she were to star, she’d have the audience convinced. She’s flawless for her role.”
Partially to make work for idle hands, Regulus reached into his cloak and lit a second cigarette in what seemed to be one grand, fluid motion. He raised it to his lips, took a thoughtful inhale, drew a conclusion and exhaled. “I doubt I’m as bad an actor as you make me out to be, Snape. You’ve got it all wrong. I’m as natural as she is.”
Severus shook his head, casting a disdainful glance at the wisps of smoke tracing their way through the night sky. “Perhaps you’d fool some of the audience, Black, but only for a brief period of time. You wouldn’t fool me, and soon enough, the audience would become disillusioned. You’d be better to close-curtain early, while there’s the chance. While the audience is still clapping.”
Regulus chuckled morosely. “You think that’s how showbiz works, Snape? You can’t quit while you’re on top -- no one ever quits while they’re on top. No one ever quits.”
For a long minute, Severus was silent.
“And you’d know, wouldn’t you?” continued Regulus, shaking his head. “You aren’t much of an actor, either.”
Silence grew thick and heavy between the two of them and Regulus waited, intently, for a response. The sentence rung in the air like an accusation and behind the mask of apathy, he could not tell if Severus was offended or anxious.
“Perhaps,” said Severus at long last, the silence shattering to a thousand pieces, “the harshest critic of an actor is another actor.”
Regulus was allowed no time for a response; at that moment, a thick, billowing cloud of green rose in the sky and began to take its ominous shape.
“That’s our cue,” said Regulus, dropping the cigarette to the ground hastily, reaching for his wand and breaking into a sprint.
“Break a leg,” muttered Severus, at his heels in an instant.
Lights.
Camera.
Action.
Fin!
<3
Kali
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Date: 2005-06-05 03:13 am (UTC)But I like this...the commenting on acting, particularly where you mention that no one ever quits while they're on top. I suppose, when it comes to Death Eaters, there's no way to bow out gratefully.
Excellent. Bravo.
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Date: 2005-06-05 04:21 am (UTC)But really. You have this amazing ability to come up with witty, though-provoking lines that are just... wow. :) Wonderful job. I love your writing.
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Date: 2005-06-05 05:28 am (UTC)You have a wonderful talent for sucking people in. I've never thought of the Death Eaters as actors before, but it's a poignant idea, and I've fallen a little bit head over heels.
The whole scene was so unapologetic. It was a little bit wistful, but it was reality. It meant "this is the way things are; they won't change, they can't change" and it struck home.
Oh. Bravo.
Standing ovation, curtains down... amazing.
Ah
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Date: 2005-06-05 11:23 pm (UTC)<3 Sophie
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Date: 2005-06-09 09:58 pm (UTC)An interesting point, though.
<3
Kali
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Date: 2005-06-11 06:33 am (UTC)Artist- Story of the Year
Song- Until the day I die lyrics
Until the day I die
I'll spill my heart for you, for you
Until the day I die
I'll spill my heart for you
As years go by
I race the clock with you
But if you died right now
You know that I'd die to
I'd die too
You remind me of the times
When I knew who I was (I was)
But still the second hand will catch us
Like it always does
We'll make the same mistakes
I’ll take the fall for you
I hope you need this now
Cause I know I still do
Until the day I die (Until the day I die)
I'll spill my heart for you
Until the day I die (Until the day I die)
I'll spill my heart for you
Should I bite my tongue?
Until blood soaks my shirt
We'll never fall apart
Tell me why this hurts so much
My hands are at your throat
And I think I hate you
But still we'll say, "remember when"
Just like we always do
Until the day I die (Until the day I die)
I'll spill my heart for you
Until the day I die
(Until the day I die)
I'll spill my heart for you
Yeah I'd spill my heart!
Yeah I'd spill my heart for you!
My hands are at your throat
And I think I hate you
We made the same mistakes
Mistakes like friends do
My hands are at your throat
And I think I hate you
We made the same mistakes
Until the day I die
I'll spill my heart for you, for you
Until the day I die(Until the day I die)
I'll spill my heart for you, for you
Until the day I die(Until the day I die)
I'll spill my heart for you
Until the day I die
(Until the day I die)
Until the day I die!!!!!!!!
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Date: 2005-06-11 06:37 am (UTC)