I'm actually thinking he should've gone e e cummings and not capitalized anything at all. At the same time, though, I am torn about the "O LIFE!" because the capitalization of life is suitably pretentious for Edward, I must agree.
And yeah, the weird random line breaks and enjambment looked slightly more ridiculous when I'd typed it to sweetcherrytree; once I'd written it out, well, it wasn't quite the madness I was going for. Blast.
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Date: 2008-03-22 01:47 am (UTC)Oh, LIFE!
...
()()()()
it is
such
a dark
and moonless~~~~~~
night?
Because I have a feeling he would be a pretentious twit like that.
ETA CURSE YOU ELJAY, YOU TOOK OUT MY UNNECESSARILY LONG SPACING.
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Date: 2008-03-22 06:35 am (UTC)And yeah, the weird random line breaks and enjambment looked slightly more ridiculous when I'd typed it to
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Date: 2008-03-22 06:42 am (UTC)Curses. Things are always getting in the way of brilliance. >:(
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Date: 2008-03-24 06:58 am (UTC)