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[cuban-sombrero.livejournal.com]

Lolz. I love it.

(and the fact that Edward only got an A-. You so know he'd go running home to Carlisle crying. ;)

[http://users.livejournal.com/_thirty2flavors/]

Why thank you.

And yeah he so did. BUT HOW WILL HE GET INTO DARTMOUTH WITH BELLA????

[kirrea.livejournal.com]

*laughs* I like whoever's loopy letters these are, like the l's and i's and f's and t's. They're very pretty.

[http://users.livejournal.com/_thirty2flavors/]

Edward has been perfecting his cursive for many years.

but actually it's my writing so THNX BB.

[kirrea.livejournal.com]

I would have thought it was inborn, being spawned in the 1920's and all that.

God I love the first two stanzas XD "I feel insignificant and dark"

[http://users.livejournal.com/_thirty2flavors/]

Yes. Well, that too.

I love that he uses "dark" twice . We should buy him a thesaurus.

[kirrea.livejournal.com]

That is my main reason behind loving it *laughs* Because his life is so dark he must reiterate it and emphasise on how dark it is. Also because he lost his Thesaurus Rex that he got way back when he used to hang with the Teradactyls and the like

[inksplotched.livejournal.com]

Edward would so use dark twice, though. LIRL

[latine.livejournal.com]

I thought Edward had a very neat handwriting? I think this is INCREDIBLY out of character. Not the poem, but the handwriting. Definitely. IT HAS TO BE PERFECT. LIKE HIS A-.

[http://users.livejournal.com/_thirty2flavors/]

SHUSH SHARON, DON'T INSULT MY HANDWRITING

I actually considered making it neater instead of essentially just my nrmal handwriting, but then I thought, WHY AM I PUTTING EFFORT INTO SOMETHIGN TWILIGHT-RELATED

[latine.livejournal.com]

I need you.

Oh Jim. Jim. Why is everything so complicated when it doesn't have to be?

Lookie at me new icon. I actually saved it months ago because I thought it was gorgeous, and now I can finally use it!

I watched the end of the S2 last episode five times.

[flowrs4ophelia.livejournal.com]

LMAO. And I bet he's so proud of it he has saved this one to re-use every time he goes back to high school.

[http://users.livejournal.com/_thirty2flavors/]

Definitely. With minor revisions every time to achieve the elusive A+.

[bluebellflames.livejournal.com]

You guys are my heroes... that is all. :D

[http://users.livejournal.com/_thirty2flavors/]

WHY THANK YOU.

[sweetcherrytree.livejournal.com]

It fails that this gets 12 comments and mine gets 3. I feel like a failure.

LIRL about the repetition of dark. And Sharon's criticism of your handwriting.

[http://users.livejournal.com/_thirty2flavors/]

Most of that is me and Crys, it's okay, bb. Plus if you want to know my secret? Write a really long fic and forlike three years, post updates on your lj, then stop updating that fic and rely on people to not un-friend your lj. Tru fax. This is how I make all my friends.

[sweetcherrytree.livejournal.com]

LIRL I WILL TAKE YOUR ADVICE BB. THX.

[mybabyangel.livejournal.com]

I think there would be more punctuation. Like,

Oh, LIFE!
...
()()()()
it is
such
a dark


and moonless~~~~~~
night?

Because I have a feeling he would be a pretentious twit like that.


ETA CURSE YOU ELJAY, YOU TOOK OUT MY UNNECESSARILY LONG SPACING.

[http://users.livejournal.com/_thirty2flavors/]

I'm actually thinking he should've gone e e cummings and not capitalized anything at all. At the same time, though, I am torn about the "O LIFE!" because the capitalization of life is suitably pretentious for Edward, I must agree.

And yeah, the weird random line breaks and enjambment looked slightly more ridiculous when I'd typed it to sweetcherrytree; once I'd written it out, well, it wasn't quite the madness I was going for. Blast.

[mybabyangel.livejournal.com]

No, I can see him going all e e cummings too. I think he would have tried both, not being able to decide which pretentious style he liked better.

Curses. Things are always getting in the way of brilliance. >:(

[inksplotched.livejournal.com]

OMFG YES AMAZING

[whir.livejournal.com]

lmao, that is gold!

[http://users.livejournal.com/_thirty2flavors/]

Why thank you!

[romanesca08.livejournal.com]

I so ♥ you for that. A friend of mine emailed me all three books when I wanted to know all the fuss was about, and I ended up being pretty happy I didn't actually give that woman any money.