I'm actually thinking he should've gone e e cummings and not capitalized anything at all. At the same time, though, I am torn about the "O LIFE!" because the capitalization of life is suitably pretentious for Edward, I must agree.
And yeah, the weird random line breaks and enjambment looked slightly more ridiculous when I'd typed it to sweetcherrytree; once I'd written it out, well, it wasn't quite the madness I was going for. Blast.
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Date: 2008-03-22 06:35 am (UTC)And yeah, the weird random line breaks and enjambment looked slightly more ridiculous when I'd typed it to