Date: 2009-04-04 08:37 pm (UTC)
“Oh, shut up,” said Rose. Then her composure finally snapped and she laughed. “Of course I’m not upset, that was ages ago.” She grinned, but then her expression sobered and she took her eyes from the road long enough to give him a stern stare. “Do it again, though, and I’ll kill you.” - ROFL. Rose is awesome.

She took one hand from the wheel and bent her arm backwards, an awkward attempt at reaching him that culminated in little more than a pat on the head. She looked at him, smiled affectionately and shook her head. - AWWWWWW. This is so adorable it made my heart all fuzzy.

And though it might not serve any particular purpose in your Gingerbread 'verse, it's a glimpse at their lives... which is most adorable! ♥ Ten2 is like a freakin' puppy. I loooove that you included Donna into this (i need an icon that says "NEEDS MORE DONNA"), and Jake is hilarious! TBH I've never really given much thought to Jake... so I'm glad you're highlighting him in your 'verse. I'm starting to like him more and more. :D

GREAT JOB. ♥ your writing. :]
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