Ah ha! I thought that I understood where the story was originally heading, but it hadn't made a lot of sense in the original version because Anna and James had been snogging originally, if I recall. Anyway, I hope that Lily does apologize eventually, as she was extremely mean to poor James, if only to show she regrets past actions. Anyway, I'm also glad to see you updating so rapidly, and with such lovely revisions! Hip Hip Hooray for you! Keep up the good work!
Hmmm....
Date: 2005-06-06 04:00 am (UTC)