ext_145489 ([identity profile] cookiegirl18.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] thirty2flavors 2005-07-13 04:23 pm (UTC)

Alright, when browsing through the TGB I found you. Curious I clicked your name and landed on your journal. I saw chapter 12, and thinking it was part and the ONLY part of a fic that got taken down.

So without even looking if there was other chapters posted up I clicked and I read it.

I loved it, I really like how you have Lily hate werewolves. Because everyone makes it as if she is kind to them because she is muggle born. Too perfect sometimes.

So then It actually hit me that you might have other chapters posted up and without hesitation I found out that you did. Now, sorry that I didn't comment for every chapter, I find that annoying when a reader goes 'GREAT CHAPTER! ONTO CHAPTER TWO!' And it goes on for about 20 or so chapters.

You have great writing skills, I will be checking often. And now I've checked the palm reading site you gave out! It looks like fun! And i like what you said about the french when James was talking, I love that.

Sophie

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