Excellent chapter. You address issues like prejudices with clarity. This chapter really explains whats wrong with the world.
James and Lily were excellent both neither paragorns nor black sheep but i have said this before. I love how realistic your fic is compared to every other fic on the net. You actually address issues like prejudice and fear and propaganda and the way a world works during a war.
I really, really love your fic.
Can't wait for the next chapter and i hope you get over your writer's block soon. They are real pains aren't they?
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Excellent chapter. You address issues like prejudices with clarity. This chapter really explains whats wrong with the world.
James and Lily were excellent both neither paragorns nor black sheep but i have said this before. I love how realistic your fic is compared to every other fic on the net. You actually address issues like prejudice and fear and propaganda and the way a world works during a war.
I really, really love your fic.
Can't wait for the next chapter and i hope you get over your writer's block soon. They are real pains aren't they?