True - I like that you put some thought into the fic. I think it helped that Donna's aware of the whole alien-fighting earth-defense thing... but still... if someone told me they grew out of a hand that I touched in some parallel universe, no matter how long we'd been friends for, I'd be like "you finally tried LSD, didn't you?" XD
What was wonderful about this part was also the fact that Donna felt betrayed. I think that worked SO well, especially since Ten2 was so afraid of losing Donna that for a moment I was like "oh no, he's gonna lose her..."
Not overdone at all! Loved it! Made me want to hug him! :D
Yeah, understandable about the insecurity thing. I mean, she basically said "but he's not you!" to Ten while Ten2 was RIGHT THERE like he didn't exist. Poor puppy.
No problem about the comments! I love that you wrote back with actual sentences rather than just "Awesome, k, thx!" :D
I'm still reading... onto the Valentine's day one. *flies away*
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Date: 2009-02-25 02:09 am (UTC)What was wonderful about this part was also the fact that Donna felt betrayed. I think that worked SO well, especially since Ten2 was so afraid of losing Donna that for a moment I was like "oh no, he's gonna lose her..."
Not overdone at all! Loved it! Made me want to hug him! :D
Yeah, understandable about the insecurity thing. I mean, she basically said "but he's not you!" to Ten while Ten2 was RIGHT THERE like he didn't exist. Poor puppy.
No problem about the comments! I love that you wrote back with actual sentences rather than just "Awesome, k, thx!" :D
I'm still reading... onto the Valentine's day one. *flies away*