I ended up setting it around here because I figured it needed to be far enough along that Donna'd be comfortable with prying and he'd be comfortable enough to let her pry, and I wanted a starting point, which Lee provided. Initially I was going to have a bit of dialogue that talked about River, too, but it never actually materialized and I can't say I'm too sad to see it go.

And that's interesting, definitely wouldn't have known that, thanks! I'll go tweak it.

Thank you!