These two -- that is, human!Doctor and Rose -- need more fluff, I think. They get a lot of angst and doom and gloom written about them and far too little giggly-season-2 moments. I'm glad you found it funny! It's been a while since I wrote something that was humour first and foremost.

And poor Donna is such a convenient scapegoat for every little embarassingly human quirk, haha.