ext_44739 ([identity profile] the-spin.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] thirty2flavors 2008-07-14 01:04 pm (UTC)

This is beautifully written! I loved For a long while he feels just slightly out of synch, like there’s a beat missing from the time signature or like there’s a scratch in the CD that still makes you jump, even after you’ve heard it a hundred times.

Nice work.
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