Yay! Chapter four! I was starting to worry that you weren't going to post the rest of it O.o That would have been very sad. (Wow, do I sounds four...) A lot of writers who have their work tampered with etc. lose the will to repost. I'm glad you haven't; I really want to know what happens! But it is important for you to post the earlier chapters first, and revisions are always beneficial to all parties.

Anyway, keep up the good work and Happy Writing!

'mistress editor'